But to my point, I was given the assignment to write a paper (3-5 pages) about an experience that lead me to learn a life lesson/something about myself. I wrote it about one topic, because I couldn't think of anything else (I guess I haven't learned many life lessons haha) but I need a third party judge, to say if they think it is too personal to submit as a paper. If it is, I can find something else to write about... and this would still make a good journal entry.
Any offers for reading/giving me a general feedback? It is at a point where if I wanted to submit it, I would need to revise it a few more time, it is still in a rough draft state...
Pleas let me know if you are willing!
